The metronome ticks
demanding to be followed
unperturbed they sway.
Donna
Photograph courtesy of Pixabay.
Sunrise or sunset?
Donna
Colleen’s 2018 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 79, DANCE & COMMAND #SynonymsOnly
Wandering thoughts realized in verse
Photograph courtesy of Pixabay.
Sunrise or sunset?
Donna
Colleen’s 2018 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 79, DANCE & COMMAND #SynonymsOnly
What a great visual I have in my mind from your words. ❤
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The ultimate compliment and writer’s goal is when a picture is formed in the reader’s mind based on the words they have written.
Thank you, Colleen.
Donna
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You are so welcome, Donna. Well done. ❤
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